All Comments on 'Little Black Ball Ch. 03'

This was pretty cool I like the setup

Another good story.

Unique and original story line. That in itself is worth 5 stars. The charcters were all very well fleshed out. This story deserves a much better rating. I wonder if it was that the sex was down played, that it is posting now at 3 plus star rating. So many good writing elements are found throughout this 3 part series. I hope the low ratings doesn't discourage this writer from continuing to add additional chapters to a very clever and original story line.

It made no sense at any point. Even for fiction it was ludicrous.

You'll notice the double standard- making a lesbian a mindless slave and infecting a cheating wife with a cancer that will kill her unless feed different sperm every few days is hailed. But emasculating, harming, or humiliating a cheating guy is not okay.

He of course killed her and burned the body. Makes about as much sense as this idiotic tale.