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All Comments on 'Little Black Blog Ch. 00'

by J_Hudson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Grammar

Your 'tease' to the story: "Intro: have you ever woken up with no clue where you are? " Should be: "Have you ever awakened with no clue..."

That turns me off as a reader before I even look at the story.

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