by FatBttmGrl
This is fun, I needed an uncle Robert when I was a mere slip of woman child.(Lol)
This is a great series! I love how Robert tries to fight what he wants and in the end Lisa wins. :)
Jimminy Crickets, it's been a long time since I read something this hot...I love the slow climb, the teasing and then the explosion. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
I loved this chapter, grl. You wrote it so beautifully. It was very moving... and very passionate. I know you were nervous about it, but there was no need. You totally knocked it out of the park with this one! Congratulations. Very well done. Can't wait to see where you take their story next.
This story is deliciously sexy. Coupled with the amazing writing and this is by far one of the best stories I've read on here. Can't wait to see where it goes from here :)
Damnnnn this was hot. It was for stories like these I decided to become a member.
You had this old feller quivering and wishing he was Robert.
Bloody marvellous, in the Australian vernacular where 'bloody' is the highest possible praise.
If this is truly your first writing... I must say.. Your a natural, A real joy to read. ( and I can't say that for some who have been doing it for years).. Extremely well written . Thank you.. And look forward to your future ventures.
this is a really good series. seems to me there are more chapters to this story and i hope one day you will write them. rob and lissa deserve to be a couple. :)
We need more of this story! I luv the naughty but romantic tales as this one! Seriously, end our suffering and tell more of their story.....
It was wonderful raw and powerful. Do continue the story. I would love to see the father come to know if this. How would he react and how would Lissa cope in the aftermath.
I just found this story and I am completely obsessed!! Everything is so perfect, please continue!