All Comments on 'Little Luna'

This guy is kind of a douche

No doubt in my mind, he’s a total douche, as well as a complete asshole

This has to be a record for smirks in one short story. Nobody likes a smirker. I found that distaste quickly became disgust as the number of smirks added up.

I smirk as I vote a 1.

Glad he wore a condom. Those kind of dudes don't need to breed.

Fun fact, asexuality isn’t something that needs to be ‘fixed’ some people don’t like sex. Get over yourself.

Okay I might get mauled for my opinion but fuck it..... I loved this story okay. I did. I enjoyed ever single smirk. I picture him as the rough around the edges guy who's intimidating to everyone but the girl he loves . he reminds me of Flynn rider from tangled (yes I did make a Disney reference on an adult site... Try to Stop me *smirks*)