by LovinDecker
It's very well written. I particularly like stories where the girl has no idea what is going to happen to her and is somewhat/totally naive.
You've got a good writing style, keep it up!
Fantastic work! A couple little errors, but the story itself was extremely well written! what a talent! Will we get to see what happens after the "To be continued?" I really hope so! I vote for a part 2! Thanks!
For a non writer you did a great job.
Obviously, your love for forced sex helped you with your work.
Will you continue ? Looks like it was awhile ago when this was written...