All Comments on 'Little Miss Cherry Ch. 01'

by LovinDecker

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vexcavevexcaveover 14 years ago
I'm waiting to see what else will happen to Kelsy

It's very well written. I particularly like stories where the girl has no idea what is going to happen to her and is somewhat/totally naive.

You've got a good writing style, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it!

Fantastic work! A couple little errors, but the story itself was extremely well written! what a talent! Will we get to see what happens after the "To be continued?" I really hope so! I vote for a part 2! Thanks!

WanttobefemmeWanttobefemmeover 3 years ago
Nice story plot

For a non writer you did a great job.

Obviously, your love for forced sex helped you with your work.

Will you continue ? Looks like it was awhile ago when this was written...

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