All Comments on 'Little Miss Goodie Goodie'

Not sure what else to say. Feeling bad for a few of the people in this story.

Great story, although with all the cheating, it was hard to like any of the characters, but the sex was hot. I guess Mike could be the only loyal one of the bunch. Great departure from the usual pattern. 5*s

Revenge can be sweet or a double edge sword. Liked the story about both being cheaters. If his friend finds out, watch out!

Santacruzman

That's an interesting change of topic. Whimsical just the same.

And I did like that you had him pedalling his bicycle. We have had a couple of peddlings of bicycles in stories lately and the marketplace is probably awash by now.

Lue

You have just launched the first chapter on two storyline. Why another short story now?

LOL LOL

Cute story.

Boyfriend lost girlfriend, girlfriend lost boyfriend, dad lost son, son hates dad and won't visit him, dad and mom live separately, and friend is about to loose friend. I think that would sum it up. lmao

OLD IS GOLD

FOR ALL YOUNG NEED OLD

That was Sweet Revenge for a cheating girlfriend but the fact that he was cheating also doesn’t make it right. The impact on the families wasn’t good either. Maybe he should have just gone in an made it a threesome instead. Thank You!

I might of tapped that then send a birthday greeting. Sweet 18 still lacking experiences

How would we exist without smartphones? Broke down and gave you a five star score.

In reality, young things think the dad’s of their friends are ancient. Unless she grew up with daddy issues (i.e., getting used and abused by adults), she wouldn’t be like this. Plus, she knew he was coming home, so why be caught in the act? More unfaithful depravity, I guess.

Gave it a 5* for n the train wreck scale.

Would love a follow up.

Yes, they were both cheaters. You can debate who was worse using her refusal to have sex with him and his hypocrisy of exposing her to everyone, when he had secrets of his own.

What I can't get past is her thinking she could pass off sloppy seconds as virginity when he got home. Maybe she was assuming he was a virgin and wouldn't notice the difference? Anyway, entertaining little story twist.

both cheaters. Interesting.

All about a bunch of cheaters! Probably the wife/mother is out of town doing the same thing!! Runs through the story -- lying, betraying and cheating. 2*s. By mistake 3*s!!

Yeah, an 18yo fucking a middle aged man. Would like to see what happens after the video came out.

Great Story but would love to hear how he got to her first before the boyfriend

Would have loved to read the aftermath, oh well.

Not bad,though I would have liked to know about the aftermath.Did his parents divorce or was his mother doing the same on her girls get together.

nice burn.

Not bad, where's the rest?

Great so far but needed a better end with the afteemath and fall of skank Tina and whore father

Outstanding. No more needed, this was just the right amount. Thanks for posting, and thanks for not making the MC suffer for having fucked Angie. He would have rather been with Tina, but she fucked him over. Bravo.

Considering Danny was already cheating on Tina, I don't really have any sympathy for him. Any of them, actually. This got a 'meh' from me.

Does he got the right to be angry. Just another hypocrite

Hahaha....nice one Danny, sending it to everyone

5 stars for Danny sending out the video but tell us the aftermath. Mr Miller the shit needs to pay

UNFINISHED

I detest stories like this. Not because of the subject matter, but because writers fucking always make them short nano shits that are never finished. They're always just scene glimpses, never actual stories. Fuck authors who do this.

Dirtball pig. lol