by lonelyforyou
Don't let the previous feedback faze you. You write well, and your main characters are well drawn and believable. I am enjoying the passion and sexual tension between Tina and Uncle Rob. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Cheers,
Lalenya :^)
Excellent beginning and I loved where you took this in part 2. Don't listen to the negative comments. You have talent and should keep writing.
Well-written, with interesting characters and a delicious storyline. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.