by jacobmerriweather
WOW - a very good and arousing story. Dad and his daughter can have a lot of fun. They can sleep together and screw each other. He can show her how he can eat her pussy and make her cum so hard. He can cum all over her big tits and much more. He can educate her with sex and they can be loving to each other and enjoy it. Thanks !
That was a fun story .You made a couple of mistakes but they take nothing away from the story. Hope to read more of your work in the future . Good job .
"Can I please put your cock in my mouth?" She begged, staring up at him with big, sad, puppy dog eyes.
"Yes, baby, you can put your cock in my mouth,"
too funny
...childish, really. It would seem more plausible if the daughter had the struggle, but it wasn't so "I'm sorry, daddy" all the time when there's no real fight on her part to try to stop. She then goes to undress in front of him in the car? Could be a hot story, but her being extremely nympho doesn't feel right in the story.
that was nice so who is next to join you two another woman why not Beth or somebody else think about it
I like that the daughter is a nympho, nice new story line. I do think you should limit how many times she says " I'm sorry" Let her enjoy that she likes and wants to fuck. I like that the dad did no fight the urge to fuck her for the majority of the story. I hope you will write more. Let her be "nasty" for her dad. Don't pay any attention to the comment about the "John" typo. I doubt if he even knows how to type, much less write a story. : )
Got me excited. Loved that she asked for more and harder punishment.
A great story,,and mostly well written, but do a read through before you post it,,and keep going on this one,,get her broken in and trained for use then have him share her so he can watch and enjoy.
I was mostly enjoying this until the scene with Adam. It was way too close to being a rape scene and wrecked my enjoyment of the story overall.
did not like the rape in the dressing room, then she didn't say anything to her dad it just went to shit quick.
It was a good story but the daughter was a little to much it would be better is she was more inocente then a solution it would of made the story more believe able
Cause the rape scene was so random and completely irrelevant to the story.
Lol at anyone that comes to the incest tab on an erotic fiction website for parenting advice.
Can anyone suggest stories like this, with a girl who tries to keep her sex drive under control, but ends up masturbating or having sex with random guys?
my hermorphdite wife could keep up with her.they would be a show to see.my wife can really cum.
This is erotica how I like it: well-written and smutty as hell. The rape scene didn't seem to fit, and I'm not sure how it added to the storyline. (Unless it was intended to kill my ladyboner; if so, it worked as intended!) I hope you write more stories!
I gave it a middle of the road score. The writing was great and the general plot was funny and entertaining! The rape scene, however, pissed me the fuck off. Now if she had told her daddy and he had beat the fuck out of the guy and kneed him hard enough to crush his balls, permanently, then explained to her she wasn't a slut because of that, then I would have been ok (mollified anyway) with it.
...then there was the whole beating her scene that turned me off; spanking her ass I can happily live with, but slapping her around, then besting the fuck out of her with the belt till he blew out all of the capillaries in her ass, major, major turn-off!! :(
The violence just killed the enjoyment the story had created, killed my boner too. ;(
This is a Hot little story. It reminds me of a Hot Lifetime movie that I saw once with a similar plot. There was no religion in the movie, and the girl doesn't pursue her father, but other details are the same. The girl gets into a car accident, starts acting very promiscuous and her mother wants her out of the house, but her father knows it's all psychological.
Absolutely sick way to treat any person, much less your daughter who needs your adult wisdom and loving guidance.
EXCELLENT short story.
What a pity that you appear to have lost interest in progressing the story, you have a perfect first chapter with a number of great further leads.
I read this story a few months ago. I did not like it then, and after reading it again by mistake my opinion has not changed. First of all, you should have not had a father sexually abusing a mentally disabled daughter in the first place. That just shows us readers just what kind of person you really are. You should have had the father have the girl seen by a medical person first, and then on the Dr's advice of father, daughter therapy plan move them into all sexual activity as a way to help the daughter find a way to cope with her need to be on a road to healing her need to have sex all the time. I am just saying make the incest and all of the kinky sex prescribed. Ha Ha then you can write more parts and follow ups with her progress into a loving relationship and children with her "Daddy". And then be a happy ever after story. A reader in Florida
Would be horrible if mom and step dad were in a car accident and Mom got the same head trauma and had to come live with him and daughter. Super religious mom turned into super horny nympho