All Comments on 'Little One Ch. 03'

Glad you were able to continue the story.

This is a really cute story gou should totaly write more!

I am not that into the puppy play usually but your writing is really good! I usually don't like the male point of view, either, but I'm enjoying it! Thanks!

I'm curious to see where you take this story! Don't rush it though I'm sure there is to do so! Thank you!

I tried not to hate it outright but the more I read, the worse it gets. I don't mind BDSM stories but all this puppy/slave crap is NOT part of what I like. So I give up. I only made a couple paragraphs of this chapter and I am foregoing the rest of the story. Sorry. It's just not for me.

I just can't get beyond the practicalities, I am aware that this is a fantasy but he's training her to be disfunctional if she ever makes it back to society, that's a worry - who's going to want a 40 year old puppy when he's had everything that he can take from her?