All Comments on '"Little" Sister'

pr, i am getting the warm fuzzies from these three pages of surrealist feminism. To this point you have me all agog at whatever salacious Daliquese dreamplane this storyline inhabits.

Looking forward to the continuation.

Now where in the hell did I leave my hookah?

Contrary to some tags, this is not a lesbian story. it is an exploring bisexuality story, but the characters start as lesbian rather than hetero. Nor is it really feminist.

As I said in the introduction, this is about finding your place.

You've been missed Pocketrocket! Welcome back. I am looking forward to more of your submissions.

i have not got a clue what most of the chapter was about.

totaly lost me , even my usual backup of using diagrams & a butterfly net to find some understanding failed me abysmally. 90% of the writing went way over my head.

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however , i thoroughly enjoyed it .

found it to be interesting & engaging.

even if i failed to understand it