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All Comments on 'Little Sister Ann Pt. 01'

by dodgeboy2

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Grammar Police

Get an editor. Your grammar and sentence structure are horrendous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Just stop now

Story sucks

bshell47bshell47almost 4 years ago
Has promise.

Need chapter two

mazofrankmazofrankalmost 4 years ago

Please find an editor. The story idea was great, but your writing and complete lack of proper punctuation made the story unreadable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not reality?

You should have included a couple more disclaimers. I couldn't get past the 3rd paragraph.

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60's male 5'8" overweight at around 280 lbs., married, had bi/gay experiences in my younger years but has remained loyal to his wife since marriage. Still dream of those younger years and love to act them out on-line.

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