All Comments on '"Little" Sister Pt. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Epilogue...?

I would love to see a next chapter to close everything up and maybe a story about Francine???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story and a great example for aspiring authors.

Although I cannot identify with the rich and famous, I enjoyed the story, but most of all your nearly impeccable writing style and mechanics. I was born in a rough neighborhood on Cleveland's near east side on the edge of the Cayuhoga River Valley. The sky was pink from the iron particles in the air by day and glowed red at night form the eternal flames of Standard Oil waste gases being burned off. The river caught on fire thanks to Dupont, Sherwin Williams, and others up stream . I worked my way out of this and graduated from college. I earned a PhD from one of the top 5 state universities in the Midwest, but never caught up with the draft dodging wealthier kids.

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