All Comments on 'Little T and her Daddy J Ch. 02'

by PaddleTeacher

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SimplySilverSimplySilveralmost 7 years ago
Hm....

This could be combined with Ch 3 for smooth reading. This one seems a little short but resolves next with Sara's response. You couks even take out the minor upstairs and atick with her pov for a bit instead of jumping to keep your readers "on task".

PaddleTeacherPaddleTeacheralmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I really appreciate the help!

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