All Comments on 'Little Things Ch. 03 of 04'

Neat balance between attention to detail and too much information. .... mmmm.

lost me on chapter 3 way to drawn out am finding another story

I personally like a long read, especially if it's good like this one. This is well written, cannot stop reading.

But jesus christ, that boy is so whipped, his ineptitude almost ruined the story for me, almost. But I'll continue to read on because overall this series has been excellent.

It's all about the journey. Glorious drama. Great work as always.

man this guy is submissive and dosent know the real world or just stucked up under his sister's commands. and sister is fool may be not... i ma just gonna read next chapter. hopefully she feels the same as brother.. may be .. just use him as a puppy dog and go back to college and start fucking like a slut again

Denial is not just a river in Egypt.

You write beautifully. I'm reading it all in one sitting.

Underrated and underappreciated, if you ask me!

Wonderful story. I love it.

"Sure, if that's what you think, sounds good. You should leave, go back to school for some research project you need to do or something. My life might have been school, and might still be, but, whether or not, I am helping Dad here on the farm, right now, every day. Go."

If he's really mad, or really wants the message to take, or wants her to feel the weight of her own words, "It was nice to be, what, the 21st guy? Thanks for that."

And there it is. The part in these stories where you think, "oh hey, things are looking up, looks like they're gonna get together now, finally", but then the separation begins for whatever contrived bullshit reason(s) the author comes up with (most do it sadly, so don't feel too bad, it's just annoying and cliche, that's all). In this case, I think the root issue is she feels undeserving of love and is also a little hung up on what others would think, thus she pushes him away and refuses to allow herself a chance at real happiness. Anyway, let's see if this sorts itself out in the next part.

I usually only comment at the end of the series, but this is fantastic.

Extremely well written and hot as fuck