All Comments on 'Little Things - The Real Position'

Any story featuring a scumbag cocaine dealer is not for me. A story featuring the constant use and sales of illegal drugs is objectionable to me, regardless of the erotic content!

What are you talking about? There was no cocaine anywhere in this story...

Sonya was riding his cock in her puss and then nikki came home and david was fucking her ass i think you messed up there . i was feeling bad for nikki but now you throw in she has been cheating WTF

I thought we where going to live happy after banging both sisters

Dammm disappointed nice story but wow

Doesn't bother me but David sold coke to Sonya and Ellen. So regardless if it was for social or a business he sold it. But like I said direct bother me and the story didn't hinge on it

This story is really about the two sisters. Both have very strong and somewhat kinky sex drives, but their very different previous sexual experiences largely determined their emotional reactions and attachments to David. Although both sisters are sympathetic characters, the problem is that the reader is far more attached to Nikki, who received much more character development, than to her sister Sonia.

thats the end it sucks out of all the man she stole the one guy with whom nikki felt in love after 3yrs of waiting how terrible you completely omitted her reaction his reaction

what a crappy ending man why does it always have to be nikki and cheating sluts like sonya get away the guy gets away all get away leaving her behind

moral blondes must be thrashed always instead of helping out them

you started love story of nikki we grew attatched to her and then suddenly you decided that sonya should be the heroine coz she is more beautiful and to compromise readers growing sympathy for nikki you dropped the bomb that nikki too was cheating just to make nikki look as bad the rest of the two

you killed nikki in readers eye to make sonya and the bastard the ultimate couple a story with no closure

feels like i wasted my entire time would avoid all your stories now

if i could i would have given it zero stars

You're so sweet ... Nikki is so lucky," Sonya said after a sniffle

yeah how lucky she is to have a betraying slut sister and cheater boyfriend who not even once regretted cheating behind her back

it was nikkis story but the author easily threw nikki being unattractive and having a child like body she is suddenly discarded by both the author and david for yet again the same cheating tall blonde bimbo sluts

if you expect me to like this shit i am sorry but this only seems like typical misogynist,fucking male fantasy of fucking both the sisters and discarding the first one as being used completely and no more attractive i wished i had known thus is male harem with blonde bimbo slut trash instead of a anal love story of a heartbroken petite girl really complete time waste 1 star