All Comments on 'Little Tsaritsa'

soo good. need more. thank u for writing

Well written, considerate of both points of view, slowly ratcheting up the tension! Love it, but need more! I actually groaned out loud when I read the end of the page and there's no more! I want more now but don't rush it, you've got a great pace going! But more!

More please

You gave enough background on Nadezsha to have us know her a little and intimated Arkady's shady background with a couple of sentences. This is potentially a really good story. I hope you generate enough chapters to make a well rounded tale.

Nadezsha is one I haven't heard before - Nadezhda (Nadia) seems more likely. Also, one's middle name is the patronymic (special version of the father's name), so Arkady's would be Alexeievich, not just Alexeyev.

Apart from that, no complaints!

Beautifully written story. I'm glad I found this a little late so I don't have to wait on the next few chapters. Thank you for sharing your talented writing with us.

Love it! Excited to read more :)

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