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Click hereHe was gone, of course. After our little adventure, once Paul realized his part in it, the caretaker had been summoned back, and off he'd gone, onto some other part of the US. I did miss him, even though his lack of awareness of personal space was quite awkward sometimes.
I sat and fiddled with my iPhone again. I opened the email app. I closed it. I checked Facebook and made inappropriate comments on Simon's wall. He and Polly had been nothing but great for me. I was lucky to have a friend like him, no question, so ithadto be reciprocated with rudeness on Facebook. I still hadn't forgiven him for Siri calling me a bitch. Polly had tried to set me up on a date, but I wasn't having it. I had too much work to do, the kids needed me more than ever, because there was a very tricky level on Halo 4 that Paula had no interest in helping with. I just wasn't ready and wasn't interested.
I knew what I was contemplating. I knew I shouldn't do it. I knew, if I did it was going to cost me. But I had had two Jameson's and that was my excuse.
With shaking hands, I wrote out a one-line email. It said, "If you were going to try and make it up, whatwouldyou do?"
And I sat there, and stared at it, wondering if I would press send or not. And then I had another whiskey and cursed Deanna, my life, the fact that water melts, and most of all, myself.
Deanna and Ryan's story is not done. Literally, writing this, I had an idea of where this might go. And hopefully, it'll be in a direction that's not been done before on Lit, at least I've never seen it, and I've read a fair bit. But don't expect it any time soon – there's a lot of other things to write first.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous25 days agoDeanna is a disgusting, viscious, narcissist.
This is a character that is easy to hate, deservedly, and also the kind of person who should never be forgiven or communicated in any way save for needs of the kids.
She absolutely deserves any evil that comes her way and she is a bloody disaster waiting to happen to any man than decides to date her. Her husband should give a copy of the video to every many she trys to form a relationship with for the next 5 years. She deserves no mercy and no quarter.
Anonymous25 days agoI have no respect for Deanna and Im losing respect for Ryan taking her back. Deanna is a slut, end of story, divorce her shes for the streets.
Anonymous27 days agoFor others out there who may be writing on Literotica or considering it. I HATE, HATE, HATE, HATE, HATE, HATE, HATE reading the slut’s “story”. If you did your job and wrote the story right (as this author did) I already know all I need to know about the slut wife. I don’t need to read her justification, her mental breakdown, her early onset menopause, temporary dementia, hormone imbalance or not having a loving family. I don’t give a fuck. She did what she did and we all know why. So piss off. I didn’t read this garbage chapter and from the comments I won’t be reading the next several chapters. Like all writers, jezzaz has some very good stories, maybe great stories. He also has some pathetic stories. I’ll stick with the good ones and ignore the POS stories. Suck is life. ROCK ON!
PrincessNutNutabout 1 month ago321 comments and I'm sure it's been covered already.
The anal sex proposed offer for Ryan was just to allow her to say he was there first, not a desire to experiment with her husband.
More damaging almost was the cursory gift(s) and the not really listening.
Anonymousabout 1 month agowell written and interesting, but I lose more respect for Ryan with each page. He's basically the classic beta male in every sense. At work. At home. In his social life....he's a low-t worker bee.
