All Comments on 'Living as Four Bodies and One Mind'

This is by far the worst result of a good idea. The author doesn't show any writing talent at all

I think it was really well written, very realistic buildup and portrayal. Give us more!

Bravo! A wonderful plot tastefully, skilfully executed. The story feels there’s more to it. This is a complex situation and the author has explained the internal arguments involved, from all the characters’ perspectives. Thank you.

Can we have this story from Shana's point of view ?

I really liked this story. Well written, thoughtful, realistic. My only suggestion would be to not skip over the couple of sex scenes where you mention the sex in passing. It's an opportunity for each to discover something new. Great work.