All Comments on 'Living at Charlies Pt. 02'

Really like princess too! This story could go one for several chapters.

Thank you.

Please stop narrating his words, and actually complete the dialog. It would feel a lot more personal if he actually spoke, instead of just telling us that he said some words. You give all the ladies a voice, why not the main character too? Thanks for sharing.

RNebular

Thank you!

You built a story of a whore and an old man coming together very well. Lots of good, well-described, sex helped, but what Charlie and HOG felt came through and made the story.