All Comments on 'Living with My Aunt'

Get rid of the drugs u arse

You write like your doing the drugs while your at the computer. You need to find something else for your inspiration.

Let me see if I have this right, your Aunt is pregnant, she's doing marijuana, hash, opium and meth? What a screwed up way to bring a child into the world, already hooked on drugs. I'm glad this is just a figment of your warped imagination.

Grammar spelling. Drug use. I don't usually make negative comments. This was bad.

I have never read sich drivel.... Get a life and lay off the drugs

.sex is cool.. Drugs are not. 71EB

You need help in many ways. other commenters have told you anonymously, I'm a registered user and I'm going to tell you. You are seriously screwed up. Literotica readers have a great ability to see fantasy and support different sexual desires. Even drugs like Alcohol and marijuana are constant factors in stories here. However, your story has absolutely no use as a fantasy piece because of the horrible writing, grammar and situation. Not to mention your condoning serious drug use by a pregnant woman. The second is go to school and learn how to write. Then get and editor who would tell you to never write such complete trash.

Amen?

To all the foregoing comments?

Amen!

And here is the worst line in the whole story: "TO BE CONTINUED SHORTLY"

don't even bother wiring more of this trash.

This has to be one of the worst stories I have ever tried to read.

So, he loses his parents and siblings in a car accident... But hey, no problemo! He's going to live with his aunt who he's had a crush on! Within a few hours, he's getting high on his drugs. (Who packed that box, anyway? In a normal world, all that shit wouldn't get "boxed up" by movers, or by someone moving: It would be hand-carried by the owner. But hey, why attempt to be realistic in any way, right?) Within a few hours, he's laughing and joking, and, oh right, and FUCKING his aunt. Because, that's what you DO after you bury your parents and siblings who just died in a car accident.

Follow the advice from this and other comments: Stop writing stories. Go seek professional psychiatric help. Do it as soon as you "realistically" can.

I'm not sure which is worse, that you couldn't be bothered to warn people this wasn't a complete story before they opened it or that you're going to continue this mess.

Pregnant woman taking drugs. No Bueno. I was imagining a nephew getting them both, or them all fucking each other, but not a woman consciously harming her unborn child.

Not worth the read. You're a lousy writer, don't know how to develop a story and you have issues. If you do decide to continue this story, it will have to end in a long-distance relationship as nephew and Aunt serve their well-deserved hard time in prison for the death or brain damage of the baby

Dont think you were quite stoned enough when you wrote this fucking garbage

You were still breathing

Get A fucking life,, and for your sake i sure as hell hope it has nothing to do with writing

Maybe start over in preschool and try to at least graduate that this time

No it WON'T be continued.

Check the profile, banned already.

Not really my type of story, although I give all stories a fair shot and read at least the first chapter to get an idea of content and direction. It did generate a couple of questions though in my mind. Like how old is he? One has to assume he is of legal age or above since he has a bong, a medical marijuana card, and class A prescription drugs. This generates another question of what does he do for income that allows him to purchase them all? However I think the biggest question is what kind of medical or mental disability does he have that would require all of these items, and more importantly, how does he function?

By the layout of the storyline so far, he was already into these things prior to losing his family. I wish you the best of luck creating a viable tale.

Crap

great to cum to

Very poorly written. If you are not willing to correct at least basic mistakes - dont write at all. Reading that was really painful.

To bad he wasn't the father of the kid in her

I love how on a porn site, some drugs are OK but others are NOT. WTF? bunch of pot snobs, ALL drugs have their place in fantasy and reality. Grammar etc. clean it up, but pedo, drug use, NC, etc. are ALL fine

top marks as i love being covered in hot sticky cum for real xx