All Comments on 'Lizzy's First Time'

like that movie with brook shields excellent

Is it so hard to find someone to check your work? Waist - not waste. I know it is picky of me, but it does spoil the read.

Good story, romantic with a slight differents to other stories.

Could have use a little back ground of how they met.

I want my first time to be like this. The love of my life is ready and I will be her rock as she says she is afraid. On our one year I'm going to fly to her home and passionately make love to her.