All Comments on 'Local Ladies'

You have to write the next chapter or two or three

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Not arousing, but a good read, I think its quite believable and I think similar things happen now in the UK. I have heard of cliques within the 'Masonic Society' who get together on a monthly basis for similar pleasures.

Listing all the girls names as they entered the orgy area was stupid. Why would you care as a reader. Amateur.

Great story series. Not keen on the fact that Avril is given no choice through no fault of her own.

Would be good to involve each of the women telling their stories