All Comments on 'Lock, Croc and Two Smoking Barrels'

To the other anonymous

Please explain what the problem is instead of just spouting insults.

As for the story

The Bad:

I feel that this should either have been cut down by a couple pages since lots of stuff is introduced and when dropped - or alternatively expanded (as in several chapters :) ) so there's room to really explore the world. Certainly plenty of room for it.

The good:

I really liked the story and the characters, though there was definitely room for a lot of character growth/ expansion

Nice story about Florida and Crocodile women, quite funny

Delightful story, amusing and even a bit sweet. Bravo!

I have never left a comment before but I wanted to say I absolutely loved the story, the chapter pins and all of the humor keep up the good work