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Octavia squealed, released her sucker grip and scattered clumsily away on all eights, taking the color of the grass before disappearing down the street, then adopting the gray of the road surface.
Michael collapsed to the ground. Odile came to his side. Rather than be grateful he wasn't hurt, she scowled. He hadn't seen her this visibly upset since they first met and she was intent on killing him.
"Who was she?" She demanded, gesturing in the vague direction Octavia made her escape.
"I don't know, honey." He croaked weakly. "She was stuck in the filter." He caught his breath, and both he and Odile saw, at the same time, standing up like a monolith in the middle of the desert, his boxer-clad ink-stained erection.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI have never left a comment before but I wanted to say I absolutely loved the story, the chapter pins and all of the humor keep up the good work
Anonymousover 6 years agoTo the other anonymous
Please explain what the problem is instead of just spouting insults.
As for the story
The Bad:
I feel that this should either have been cut down by a couple pages since lots of stuff is introduced and when dropped - or alternatively expanded (as in several chapters :) ) so there's room to really explore the world. Certainly plenty of room for it.
The good:
I really liked the story and the characters, though there was definitely room for a lot of character growth/ expansion
