All Comments on 'Locked In'

I really enjoy all your stories! Thanks for sharing,hope you keep them coming!

Love it, I hope it continues! Thank you!

Great story, great subject. Love the details and would like even more. Let this young beauty really drink from the fountain of love - she will get the love juices straight from the source.

I love the themes that you explore. I'd really love if you would do a continuation of this. Not just stuff like Ms. Wright deflowering her and turning her into her wife, but also have Joanne become a more confident young woman, and a sexual equal to Ms. Wright. That would be insanely hot.

good story..excellent vocabulary...wonderful context of a mature dyke and budding young girl...but there is starting to be a sameness to your stories....you have good talent..it is time to let your characters take you places...let your imagination free...explore.....good luck and good writing...

This is a very good story in all respects please continue - maybe the evening after graduation?

Thank you

This is probably the first teacher/student story where I felt like the teacher was kind of taking advantage. Not saying it wasn't a good story, I honestly liked it. I just wonder if that was intentional or not. If so, it would be kind of cool to see where you take it.

Well done and with good feelings for each other.

The story is all over the place 👀

I couldn't read the first page

I love how you bring your beautiful butch-femme perspective to a delicious older/younger taboo. I really enjoyed reading this.

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