All Comments on 'Locker Room Encounters Ch. 01'

Isn't Dan even the tiniest bit aroused by sucking off Cody? If he isn't, where's the point?

Commas. The story really needs them. There's a time for breathless excited dialogue but not constant as it wear on the reader. Otherwise, an interesting tale.

even though he says he didn't want to suck the hot-jock-cock/- we know he wanted to do it cause he's been staring at it.....so it would have been better to have him be shamed by his cock getting hard and if he blew his own load in response/arousal to the jock unloading all over his face and in his mouth....have the jock slap him in the face with his club/cock....rub his drooling cock head all over the bitch's lips paint them with pre-cum, like lip gloss...etc

basically, this had LOTS of potential to be way hotter. it wasn't terrible it just could a been so much better

The roughness was really I wanted cody to kiss him in an upnoxious way thou because it would have kinda sealed the deal.. If u know what I mean.

I hope you are going to continue this, because this one was hot ;)

Please take into account the suggestions in other comments, but still make your own story.

this has been a fantasy of mine for years !!! love it. want more

This story is perfect, got me horny. Would like to meet cody one day so we can suck each others dick and nipples.

I'm heading to my local pool now for some hot laps, I wish that I could encounter the same situation, when I head to the shower/change room after, definitely a fantasy I want to happen. I so want to be a married whore forced to suck Cocks.