All Comments on 'Locker Room Revenge'

Dude, I'd never agree to date a character like this one and I can deepthroat better than any man. Empty and callous always gets boring.

shoving her face in the toilet was stupid, not sexy at all. Your character is a totally immature asshole.

Just awful story

This story is stupid.

Shit story and shit character.

This sounds like it was written by a nerdy 14 year old while jerking off.

She will never be the same do you know how much councaling she would need just because she liked a guy ? Ohh I know the rest of her life......

Yeah, this was really dumb. "I'll stick her head in the toilet now" - I mean, it's not even exciting to read.

Well-written and unapologetically cruel. I love the humilation and the lack of remorse. Incredibly hot.

This honestly wasn't even good. This was more than cruel and was written so poorly. Awful.

If I found out a cutie liked me that much I'd forget the other girl! Ask her out, take her on cute dates. End of story.

I would have kept the blonde and forgotten that J-something bitch while balls deep in her. Agreeing to do anal at first chance? Fucking keeper!

This story was lame all around and I feel bad for the other people who read this and waste the five minutes it took to skim through it. Weaksauce.

stick her head in the toilet? how lame dude

Soooo honestly I'd like to stick your head in a toilet and drown you kill yourself this was bullshit dude I mean honestly I'd take the blonde and marry her she's a submissive slut best wife ever least u know she would never say no

This was a waste of time to read. What a lame story. It was too unrealistic to get into.

you know someone should take you into a room with a bunch of guys and let them do you that way. I bet you wouldn't be into treating a girl like that anymore. you would have to be a complete dumbass to do that to a girl thats willing to do all that for you. in the story you say you did it cause the black girl you liked wouldn't betray her friend. so what happens if you go out with the girl and she finds you lame and doesnt won't to see you anymore. you done fucked up with the girl that worships you.

This is one of my favorite stories; I love your writing.

I'm sure some kind of karma will be coming in his direction... maybe she agreed to finally go out with him for a reason.I'd hope to see him get his just desserts.

Ruining a young girls life that you don't have the balls to tell that you're not interested. Boarding school? Surprised the girl didn't try killing herself. Oh and all just to get his dick wet.

This is as bad as one similar written by Nageren.

I know it's just a story and all, if found out a guy did that to a sweet innocent young girl, I would take a 2 foot garden hose and stick it up his ass. Then take a piece of barbed wire about 1 1\2 feet long. Stick the wire inside the hose, then holding the wire in place, yank the house out and throw it away, leaving about an inch or so of barbed wire sticking out his asshole. Then watch as he tries to get it out.

Horrible

Fucking hell that ending actually took a psychological hit on me for once. Might not be able to jack off for the next few days.

Idk, it went all pretty good, even to a gangbang which is good. But how he theated her at the end was shit.

Now I can walk. My boner died.

Really dude? Really?

I am sorry, but that's was way fucked up. She was so nice and it's not her fault that she loves so much Collin, she didn't deserve anything.

I would love to be taken by an entire locker room of men!! It wouldn’t be a need to trick me to go in there, just use me completely!! I’ve soaked through my panties just thinking about it!!!

Beyond fucked up. What's wrong with you dumbass? This isn't hot or erotic. You're a sicko loser if you can get off to this.

thats fucking wrong

I can't even say how many times I've sat there with my hand in my soaked panties while reading this. So grateful...

Hope the jenny chick just laught in hes face. And then every chick in that town wouldnt date or fuck him.

This needs a 6-10 year follow up where Sarah sees to it that Colin gets his due and it should be bad. Colin is a big prick. Sarah is, or was, nice highly infatuated girl who deserved a nice guy. Get even Sarah.

Wow, reading through these comments amazed me. Yeah, it probably is twisted and fucked up, but this IS also the non consent category and more than half the stuff I read here is reluctance or starts with non consent but ends with 'they wanted it all along anyway'. So, add me firmly to the category of fucked up people, who would never enjoy ruining someone's life in real life, but can't help but getting incredibly wet reading about it. If this is not your thing, just find another story, because on most other stories I feel like writing bad comments, just because they're weak. But I don't, because we all enjoy our own things. The myriad of categories on this site should prove that..

And to the writer.. please keep writing. Your stories may not always be a 100% real life logical, but duh, it's fiction. Finally some no remorse, true non consent.

So very hot. She’s a trooper. Must have looked adorable.

Dreamyy

I'm a woman and love non consensual stories especially verbal degradation. I always "come"back to this one make me soo dammn wet!

Wtf

A bit too nasty for my liking in fact far too nasty now I really think about it I just hope no young man reads this and decides to emulate this story in any shape or form I think you should think before writing such an account it would have made it a little less unsavoury if there had been so karma to this story

Its perfevybfornthe category, and th ending was messed up, but hey, its fiction. I liked it. Wish you would get back to writing

I do like it, the non-con aspect, the stupid, naive teen looking for love and finding an asshole who just uses her and passes her around. I also do come back to these kind of stories.

Wow. That was stunningly &&&&ed up. Like, shocking. Even though at some points it was surreal, the overall concept and approach was believable, making it all the worse. The writing is mostly good with a few slipups here and there, but good enough that it elevates the story tremendously. But the content of it is a punch to the gut.

I can vicariously feel the pain Sarah must have experienced. Gosh, that's awful.

Damn this was just a little to potentially real of a situation for me. I just feel bad for her, but if that was your aim then your a damn good writer.