by gaymancloz
few gramatical errors, but sooooo fucking hot. Puulleeeeeeezz! continue to write more.
Thank you all for your kind words. I am currently awaiting approval of the sequel.
I enjoyed this story ... the coach watching them [secretly] gave it a nice bit of excitement at the end.
great story and very hot.the only objection i have is that the coach had to interupt.....otherwise they might of went further and added some oral to it
were bothe your cocks cut or uncut? It is not the same to handle an uncut cock: can give you special pleasures!!!
hope you come back and do more ... you have a nice style especially in the sex portion ... would love to see more back story and pre-sex interaction ... I think you'd excel at that
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