by Maria24
If so your english is impeccable. However the term "Nether Lips" refers to the Vaginal Lips not the lips in your mouth. I doubt that Sebastian would have had any of those accessories!
Anyway good story gave it a 4*
This is a great piece of writing. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very sensual.
Mellifluous Maria --- Great story!! You are a talented writer, with even greater potential. I know whereof I speak because I am a widowed professor teaching Creative Writing, Literature, Poetry, Film, and Communications at various colleges and universities here in the St. Louis area. I used to be Handsome, Sophisticated, Suave, Debonair, and Witty. Now, alas, I am only the last four:( :( intend to read the rest of your stories. If you are interested in discussing your writing in more detail, write me at gavican2003@att.net. A surreptitious squeeze of what I'm sure is a tantalizing tush (lol). Prof. Gav
Great story, well written and rounded. The sex was really hot. I wish I could write half as well as you.