by There4You
The story is far fetched to say the least and the plot so far is unbelievable. Perhaps write more in your realm of life, the fantasy just doesn't ring 'true'. It doesn't seem plausible that this 'might' happen.
This looks like a good start as a fairy tale where the poor good looking man wins the rich princess, with his good looks, manners and hi big dick. Proceed...
This looks like a good start as a fairy tale where the poor good looking man wins the rich princess, with his good looks, manners and hi big dick. Proceed...
Very unbelievable. Logan's a hussy. So unrealistic it doesn't even get close to reaching me.