All Comments on 'Lola'

I have never ever ever commented on a story and I've been reading these for like ten years. This was so fucking hot I am panting and wet. Excuse me while I go find my partner and demand an orgasm.

I gave you a 5 because it was hot. And you obviously have skill as a writer, but please pay attention to continuity. First, when she was reaching for the cereal her panties were pink. Later they were black.

Ugh I know. The panty color thing is bugging me so bad. XD

Thanks for your rating! <3

Definitely HOT story! You are definitely a superb writer. I wouldn't mind seeing what happens next...but I REALLY want to know what happens next with the priest and the teenager in your other story. LOL

When you pick a colour, stick with it

Her underwear colour jumped drastically from pink to black.

Still lacy though, that's a plus 😉

This is probably the best erotic story I have ever read. (And i've read a lot.) Fantastic writing.