All Comments on 'Lola and the Demon Ch. 01'

by BobbyZeus

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praitorianlord11praitorianlord11about 9 years ago
Definitely interesting

Can't wait to read more of their adventures

SynapsisSynapsisabout 9 years ago
Incorrect penis size?

I'm thinking that you must have meant that Ziphar's cock was 6 or 7 inches in circumference, rather than diameter. A 7 inch diameter cock would mean that he was almost as wide as he was long. Considering Lola was able to get any of it in her mouth, I'm guessing you just screwed up the terms.

BobbyZeusBobbyZeusabout 9 years agoAuthor
RE: Incorrect penis size?

No mistake of terms was made. Ziphar is meant to have an absurdly large and frighteningly shaped penis. I will concede that some suspension of disbelief may be required here. I appreciate your feedback. This story was a "trial run" for me. I hope you will read my upcoming quasi-sequel "The Demon's Disciple".

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