All Comments on 'London'

A very nice story! I wish I could give you a 90% rate or something similar for that.

You tell the story very well, and I like the seduction, the gently drawn out beginning of the encounter, and I even like the interplay of what they say to each other.

The nit-picking thing for me was some of your dialogue was buried in the narrative, not split out as it should be. Your characters speak so genuinely, please use write out their dialogues.

Of a good story becoming even better. We all wish we could go to a bar and connect with a sexy woman who we can eventually call our own. I agree with the comment regarding the dialogue of the butch asking the femme to tell her what she wants. That could have been segmented better but damn, this is the makings of a hot love affair. I think I'll plan a trip to London sooner than later. Thanks for the good read

This so so sexy and erotic, thanks, J xxx