All Comments on 'London Commute'

A promising start. It could even be an erotic short story by itself. It leaves the reader mildly frustrated but you arouse turgid feelings in this male - thoughts of silky thighs and pressing bodies are somehow much more erotic than some of the more crude descriptive prose used by certain others.

Keep up the good work.

I'm anonymous in this comment but please don't take that as rude.

You can have many an erotic hour or so on the tube at rush hour,its called Frottage.

Loved the way that you presented both male and female point of view. I cannot speak for the female POV, but you certainly got the male bit right.... Keep on writing

Very erotic! Someone spoke of the story leaving the reader frustrated. Not me! Well written - I didn't proofread (that was NOT my intention when reading the story! *grin*) but I didn't see any glaring issues to detract from the story. I CAN speak from the woman's POV - not bad, but could have been expanded a bit. Nevertheless, a very nice story to cum to! I would love to see another story with these characters - maybe the next time she takes this train, they get bolder? Whether you continue this story or not, PLEASE keep writing!

This was wonderful I hope you continue it!!!