All Comments on 'London Underground Ch. 05'

Deliciously yummy..hot..well written

What more can i say, 5 stars!

@plusher - this story reads like a decadent, rich chocolate mousse. i absolutely loved this chapter. 5 happy stars from me! :-)

Oh and Suzy's response to those bitchy women at the pub? Priceless.

your approval is all the reward I need, glad you enjoyed

I waited all day to read this! Your writing, and the story itself, continues to be decadent, indulgent, unique, and very hot!

It really does give me warm feeling that people are appreciating what I'm doing, coming from folks with such great talents it means even more.

This series just gets better and better.

Erotic writing at its best

the next chapter will cover Suzy's becoming at the will of Niall so keep checking back