All Comments on 'Lonely Autopilot'

I really hope that you will continue this story line

Not usually found a good reason for it.

I like the part where it gave her just the right amount of penis, climatic sex, and ejaculate...

I really liked how at the end, despite proposing such a bleak outlook of the remants of humanity as loners, that ending really was JUST uplifting enough. :D

Well that was a bit different. That was quite the attachment procedure, I didn't think it would end well for Sin. This could be worthy of another chapter do you have it in you ?

I wondered... will there be "female" AI/male human version, too?)

stop reading and search for the definition of a fucking acronym. The reader may not come back to your story.

In the second paragraph, you do just that...

The rule of acronyms is the first time you introduce the term you spell out the entire phrase, then include the acronym after the phrase, in parenthesis.

By following this rule,

- you do not make your reader feel dumb.

- you provide a reference for subsequent uses of the acronym.

Learn it and use it, or don't use acronyms.

There is a caveat to this rule, and that is when the acronym is introduced in dialogue. Then, a footnote, or parenthetical comment, defining the acronym, in place, is appropriate.

GeoD

Interesting read, really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work:

Loved your world building here. Great little story.

Another Wow! Well done