All Comments on 'Lonely Cashier'

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Simplyme99Simplyme99about 10 years ago

Excellent tale, entirely believable and exciting.

greybeard851greybeard851about 10 years ago
Too Short!

Short but sweet. Loved it! I'd love to know what happens to them; Was that a 'One-Night-Stand', or does something more develop???

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaabout 10 years ago
Good,

Good page,hope this is just a start of a few chapters for this couple,could be a nice short story,,,

OvercriticalOvercriticalabout 2 years ago

I read through the story quickly expecting a twist of some sort. I thought it might be a guy who made a bet with his buddy that he could fuck the ugly cashier, but apparently the author wants us to believe that "tall, good looking guys" sometimes are attracted to unattractive women. OK, I'll buy in for now. 3*

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