All Comments on 'Lonely Rhodes'

I think that she would call late at night once in a while until her star burned out by which time Brett probably wouldn't be available. She needs to re-evaluate her life as a result of something dramatic like discovering herself pregnant.

This story definitely needs at least one more chapter. It is a lovely story that had me wanting to hear more - a call from her for the calming effect it would produce, etc.

Definetly needs a second chapter, could even work into a series.

Yes another chapter is required, she must call him for the suport she will need on her tour

Yes finish the fairy tale! She should call! Happy endings are everyones favorite!

I would love to read it!

Thanks for writing!

That was a lovely story I would love to read a more.

This was good and I'd love to see a second part. I thought it was well written, although the dialogue was a little stilted (but then dialogue is probably the hardest thing to write) at times. Hope she calls. :)

A down to earth guy, a gal whose life is a bit surreal. I can see this story going in all sorts of directions. It's lovely to have a story from a male perspective - most of the romance stories I read here seem to be written by females and I often find myself wondering about the male perspective.

What a wonderful story- Surprisingly entertaining and interesting heartwarming story about two strangers in the night. Her identity is not really a surprise but did add interest to the story. Would love to see a chapter two .

the Ct. Yankee

To quote Oliver Twist; "Please sir, give me more." Keep up the good work!

The vote is in and it is clear that Kim will be calling Brett, so it appears I have work to do. From your comments it seems we agree there should be more and in what direction it should go. Thank you for all your comments and stay tuned.

Paul

I want more!!!!!!

An hour after meeting her he thinks he is falling in love with her

Yeah I think the wanker is right, he needs to stroke A few off

I highly fucking imagine

Gave it an ace for the attempt

Yes, do continue this story. They could secretly meet and those clandestine meetings would make for quite a story. Perhaps they could even marry in the future or he could become her manager and husband. Write more please.. I am nearly finished with your stories and though I read them out of order to some extent; it was wonderful reeding and I look forward to more. One bit of advice I would like to offer as constructive criticism; please add a second editor to catch some of the small errors that seem to occur when you are really rolling with the story. Woodbgood

I gather Kelsey's Secret Identity was supposed to come as a big surprise. Oops.

Life can be good. Very good things do happen to good people, they are not all fairy tales.

I love this story. Please continue it and yes, have her call and then have those 2 get married and have a wonderful life together

Very nice! Tastefully written, with an understanding of the trials of celebrity life. Please write another chapter where they fall in love, he moves to Georgia and they marry and have children that sing.

I know there are more chapters. I know I've read all before (×2 or3). I also know I have really enjoyed this adventure.

Again, glad this adventure is so fun, loving, and hopeful - even sexy!!

A sweet story of two out-of-synch lives running into each other and find that maybe there is a way to match up. It is hard to imagine that a celebrity of her stature can find a way to insert some level of normalcy and get together with Brett, but who knows. A creative author could do wonders with this as a start ....or maybe not. We'll see. 4*