All Comments on 'Long Drive North'

Definitely not a common one, either. I like the oblique approach, too - most people would have rushed through the car part and gone straight to the wedding, but I love the slice-of-life thing you've got going on. Also love the level of comfort between them - it's not forced at all, and I really do believe that they've been together for as long as you say they have.

The only thing that distracted me was the accents - since you told me in the beginning what they sounded like, all I could hear was that Scottish guy with the black hair from Pocahontas (the Disney version) talking about fucking. (I guess that's one of the drawbacks of being an American - all of your ideas about foreigners come from cartoon movies.) Anyway, very well written and characterized, and I'll definitely be checking for more submissions from you.

As a working class homosexual, I can relate to the events and it's completely believable. Added to this the story is well crafted, gently paced and highly imaginative. Well done! I look forward to other submissions from you.

Neither fellow quite my cup of tea but this was as authentic as anything I have read here in months. Unless mm137 is a one trick pony this is the beginning of something big. Really big!

Cheers for the feedback. I wrote this because there seems to be a lack of the sort of "erotica" I like to read - with plainspoken working class Brits fucking each other in it. I plan to write at least another chapter or two, assuming the story doesn't seem forced.

kinda liked this coz of the way u described the rapport between the two of dem...keep up...

There'sa second part called Long Drive North (The Hotel) (http://www.literotica.com/s/long-drive-north-the-hotel). Soon as I get round to it there'll be a third part too.