All Comments on 'Long Haul Ch. 01'

as usual, you had me at "muscular"! :p

A nice start, can’t wait for more!

Very good, I was lost in space for a while until that alarm shook me. I like the asteroid mining theme there have been some good ones here. Were we in n-space durring that workout, it was anything but normal.

I've been enjoying Teflers, Three square meals for my syfi fix. Now I'm in for the long haul. Please don't run out of storytelling, or those pills, or redheads ! Wren has good intuitions and guessed along with her about Bonnie. Now to see if that was a real language 不是你的第一次美女

Not your first time beauty. Not my first rodio either

I’m in for the Long Haul now. The sex was hot! I didn’t understand the timer, maybe it had to do with the limitations of the cock-lengthening and awareness heightening meds.

I’m glad that Bonnie is more than a prostitute on the run from a Space Pimp. She’s a Corporate Terrorist, Cyber-Punk Yakuza or something. It makes her more dangerous, and puts her on a more even stature with Wren. That’s good. Bonnie’s probably very good at Wren’s “Capture the Flag” Internet Combat Games. Maybe they’ve played against or with each other in the past?

Really says something when I'm skimming story titles for smut and end up glued to one more for genuinely interesting character nuance and banter. You did a phenomenal job here.

Would love to read the sequel.

A great story, I like both of the characters, especially Wren’s humour. Mr. Cat is now my favourite fictional animal :)

I recently picked up a story with a similar opening (deep space hauling, lone woman on her ship with her own unique tech who finds a hostile stowaway) and i was reminded how much better and funnier this one is :) thank you for sharing it.

I have, over the years, collected a lot of art (for this story and others). Be sure to check http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1496319 to see these characters and more!

But I am concerned over Wren’s orgasms. Does growing a dick make her unable to come? Because damn, that’s a tough trade off, no matter how good it feels. But onwards and I might find out.

When I woke up this morning, I had no idea I would be thrust into this new literary world. And dammit, you’ve done it again woman, you’ve hooked me.

As im not native its quite hard to follow all your outer space language …. But ignoring the details i get the tale together ….. so still one question is left why the last scavs ship lost the oxygen, was there some in common with those working drones? …… entertainment pure and five 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 ok ten stars spaceship 🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀 or ten spaceships