All Comments on 'Long Live The Queen'

What a fantastically breathtaking piece of art! Your incomparable writing style and refreshing vocabulary alone had me squealing in my seat. The story line was brilliant and the build up was tantalising. Absolutely love this story and cannot wait for more! XxXx

Wow - one of the most original pieces of writing on the site to date. I have never seen chess-sex before!

I've come across 'strip Scrabble' but this sounds even more fun -- and you wrote it so very well too! You will have to try your hand at a sexy lipogrammatical story, I can see :) !

In fact, I'm sure you could do it! Well done, five stars, and a Happy New Year.

Now that's a game of chess I would go and watch

I think Leyna and Cyndi are on a roll . There new relationship

dynamic is sexy , Watch out Cyndi for the queen is after you , though I suspect Cyndi

might just let the queen catch her.

Thank you

jc