by notabutch
this story was very amature & drawn out before coming to the point.
This story was very well written. However not long enough for my tastes but then I am more into seeing the character development from story to story... But like I said ignore the "amature" feedback.
As always, your stories are heat-enducing and are told from a very believable point of view. I love them.
Very well written. I also appreciate your sense of humor. You cracked me up a couple of times. Thank you for sharing.