All Comments on 'Longing for Chelsea'

when will the 2nd chapter come out, can't wait for it

I'll start by saying I love a character with hair on her vagina. These two female characters have quickly become interesting while slowly coming together. Their sexy encounter arises from a subtle beginning to passionate climax and yet only a fond attachment. The too often used, the term of love does not apply and your gentle touch creates a twin tension between them for additional sex play and new conquest. Creative expression clearly defined sexual orientation as Bi-sexual and this too was nicely done.

Writers too often tie an interaction between their characters off at the culmination of a sex scene. I congratulate you on seeing beyond this common mistake. Two people, regardless of orientation, have a sense of understanding and companionship after sharing a sexual encounter. When Mary is bidding ado to Janet and, "Janet's eyes shone with a look of lust," you penned a masterful connection. Then topped it with having Mary tweak Janet's nipple through the banker's wife's dress at the door.

Very well written and I am looking forward to your continuation. 5 Star.

Your approach to the subject is refreshingly real and most welcome. Mature women with real bodies and no less sexy because of it - definitely better than reading about some idealised, super-fit women all of the time. I look forward to the next chapter - thanking you so very much.....

Wonderful writing - good premise. Please continue.

Please don't delay with the next part - it is very promising!

Really fun waiting with interest

Oooh i want more!!

Please post it soon.

please dont let us wait another 10years !

we both loved this story

This is a truly exciting story! Please, write the sequel!!!

Nice story. It definitely has potential. Can't wait to see if the MILFs succeed

This story already has me wanting more. A fantastic start and I look forward to the next installment

Oh my! Wow, this is so sexy, I was naive, curious, and infatuated by a mature, successful, professional Mary-type, who was 20 years older than me. She so much attracted my interest in subtle ways initially. I found myself wanting to spend more time at her house. During the Summer I turned 18, I used her pool frequently. I began to enjoy seeing her in various stages of undress. I am petite, with olive-skin, long dark hair, and my breasts are full and perky for my small frame. She was tall, blonde, and so sensuous. It was an interesting Summer and I was willingly seduced.

Beth in California...

Wow i think this series could be very interesting :) Liz

I love the first chapter. I wish I was Chelsea.

Nonsense! As always, the husband is a failure in sex matters! And as always, the wife went into marriage as a virgin! But she knows that the husband is not good at sex! And that's why she willingly falls into the arms of lesbian women! All of course church members !! How Christian !! Especially the mother (stepmother) of the sexually incapable husband! And what should be good about the misfortune that the marriage of the two will meet?

This is my second reading of your wonderful story. I didn't leave a comment last time and I'm fully aware of how a husband can be in bed. They do need a bit of 'training' when they haven't had much experience.

Thanks for sharing this story I loved reading it and loved the way it worked out. Cant wait to read the rest of it.

loved this story so much. am looking forward to read8ing the further chapters

As one who shares Mary's and Janet's lust for younger women but also enjoys the sexual company of women my own age and older, I have very much enjoyed reading this first chapter and am eagerly looking forward to continuing. I love the way Mary and Janet skilfully sound each other out sexually (both having well-developed gaydar!). Other things I liked are: (1) the way you evoke the image of sex lurking and simmering beneath the outwardly prim and sedate surface of the church setting, and (2) Janet as a woman who has cultivated a "sapphic circle" (of which I look forward hopefully to meeting some of the members).

Thank you for a delicious read!

Ginaxxxxx

The style and grace with which you apply to the character building and understand, along with the blend into seduced action is exquisite. I love it!