by PMDlite
I have been interested in telekinesis or psychokinesis,myself, for some time now.
Very well written story and very sexy too. I have been thinking of writing one about this subject, only mine would be in the mind control section.
Hope I can bring as good a story as you have.
Sorry, but this story didn't really do it for me. I am normally a SCI -FI and fantasy guy, open minded to new ideas. I just couldn't make the leap.
It seemed well written, just not for me. Keep writing, maybe the next one will grab me by the balls.