All Comments on 'Look Upon My Works, Ye Mighty...'

But I liked it. Thanks for writing it.

Because I'm me I've worked out the entire history of this universe and all the side characters and such. I can even go into the details if...anyone cares.

I enjoyed Devil May Care and Endurance Predator, but this is even better. I would love to see more in this vein. Thanks so much for sharing it!

Beer-Maker

...also, um, I goofed on my math.

Maddie is only 45-50 kg, not 80.

If by going into details, you mean, write more awesome stories chronicling the adventures of Xander and Maddie. Then by all means, go right ahead!!

One of the best short stories i have read :)

Hoping for a followup xd

Please write more stories about their adventures.

A fun and lighthearted teenage superhero sex romp. Wonderful job, keep going.

Thanks for all the comments, everyone, seriously. If you like this story, check out my other stories both here and on Amazon.

I'm going to finish off Idle Hands (the sequel to Devil May Care), then see about finding more stories set in this universe, don't you worry!

Though, I mean, I'm someone with a chronic overabundance of ideas. Cause I also want to write my Indiana Jones but with Furries Story too. For some reason I really want to write a story with a lot of Nazi punching in it.

I'd love to read The Further Adventures of Maddie and Xander!

Great story!

I. LOVED. THIS. STORY! Can we get more of these two? And maybe more of this world?

Nuff said.

Usually I find this style of story too outlandish. This was perfectly done. Just wish it was a bit longer. Great stuff.

When I read your stories I always get the sensation that I picked up a new sci-fi book and decided to start reading 3/4 of the way through. If you made your stories twice as long to spend time with the characters backstory it would help readers care about the characters. The world you have imagined is really interesting, but needs to be described in more detail.

As it stands, I hesitate to read your stories. With both the character development and world description lacking, it's confusing from the very start and I've lost interest by lit page 3.

D'aaaawwwwwwwwwwwww.