All Comments on 'Looking At Tasmin'

Sorry 'bout that.

/Icingsugar

I think this story was very well written, the flashback idea works great, and I love the dialouge. Also a different interresting perspective on things, and a really steamy scene in that dark room. My only complaint would be that when the hot parts ended and the story tied up the loose ends, there was a bit too much reading left. You chould easily had saved the best bits for later.

Your words bring the story to life, enabling the reader to almost feel the interactions of the characters. Your strategy of weaving the two pieces of the story together was flawless. My only suggestion would be to possibly write more about their first interactions together. Excellent!

Vamp

You're talent is incredible. you have a way with words that I haven't run into on this site before. Don't change your style or your story. I liked this, it wasn't about the sex per se. The point of the story was a lot deeper and more individual then straight sex. Thanks, it was wonderful.