All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 01 Ch. 11-15'

Could not stop reading. Hope you have lots more chapters. Great story and sex.

Really good, their experiences are progressing nicely, I do hope that there are very many more episodes to come, Oh sorry, I should have said cum.

Need more chapters. The foursome just stopped, need to expand on it.

Could use this as a blueprint for how to get creative. Kep them coing and cuming.

I like the loosening and how it progresses, I think that all relationships could use some "loosening to better develop their own! Great Job Steve

I just don't know? To me this the novel Stepford GenZers. Really this would be an HR's possible worst nightmare. Dave and his wife were living a good life w/o any doubt they would be together forever.

I believe there should have been more cause and effect when Dave became Smiling Dave, due to the fact he suddenly became a take charge kind of guy at work and home; he is the only one of the group without penis envy.

As for Devi, the exswinger and shot caller. She has a super ego, for she thinks she can do no wrong. Just walks into peoples homes etc. All the the people in the story are ridicolous, they profess their love at every blow jub as if they all felt inferior. Then they question each other with interpersonal speach more the Naruto. The real world is not like this. Also at a pot luck pty as soon as the chick lost her top, it would be on... they were all just to shy and didnt know how to start a 3 way or more. This group would have talked about doing it for years. As for the Tattoo man, do you suppose he saw Devi now confirming her dead end job by getting a trampstamp and not being professional any more? Just because he has money, did he have any experience in the business venture of his; or could it fail and take the town with it? Really his living standard want a clue, or was it petite corporal syndrome? Last but not least wouldnt Devi 's husband be gay or bi? I ask because out of 5 women, who mates seemed to not care about anybody elses fluids none wanted a MMF, and no guy questioned a MFM, with thoughts of FMM? Oh and none of the 5 women thought to try the 8.5 up their ass?

One question to leave you with, in a brave new world, grade each person... shouldnt be hard each began at at a two hr holiday re: the pot luck with friends. Other than that it was just a fine fiction.

Most of it is fine other than the stupid challenge stuff. Flash your boss ? Are you out of your mind ?