All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 02 Ch. 10-14'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I need his prescription...

dozendozenalmost 6 years ago
Great story...

... although similar to "Billionaire and the sisters."

I suspect that you revealed something of yourself when you lapsed into first person near the end of this chapter: "We filed back into the room with our coffee cups. "

Are you the real Dave, or would you just like to be?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Bored

After about the end of the first chapter I was completely bored with this, not sure if you have an end planned or not.

RubberuwRubberuwalmost 6 years ago
Great but also eyeopening

Good erotic entertainment, but also opens up on the importance equality in every aspect of life. If men focus on giving pleasures and right, we surely will get more and better ourselves.

And we will hand over a better world to our kids.

So much more in this story then we can comprehend.

You have surely got a fan in me!

Take care

jmarks50jmarks50almost 6 years ago
great story

Just the way I want to live....

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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