All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 03 Ch. 01-04 - Growth'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Garbage

Story has run away from you and is now just ridiculous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Please continue...

Unlike other comments...I truly enjoy this story and look forward to more and frequent chapters. Unfortunately, my login never works (tried changing it three time...still does not work). So I have to provide this as anonymous; hope you get to read it.

BrokenLance13BrokenLance13almost 6 years ago
Friends and neighbors

I wait anxiously for another instalment of this story. They are my friends and neighbors and I wish they were close enough for me to visit. The detail you put in is amazing and I feel like I can actually feel their moods as individuals and as a collective.

Thank you and please keep this going!!

Lance

RubberuwRubberuwalmost 6 years ago
Still very good!

Do enjoy reading your story, looking forward to next chapter. In our current world your stories provide some hope. To bad it’s just fiction 😉

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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