All Comments on 'Lord and Master Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Um?

That's it?? One chapter sine 2006? Well that just won't do so get writing...now. thanks

Horseman68Horseman68about 8 years ago
Regret this Story has been Left Unfinished

Your departure for now ten years from the writing of this story is very disappointing as you are quite a talented author. Have enjoyed this small glimpse of your craft and can only hope that nothing unfortunate has happened with you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This is a super fantastic beginning! I hope you write more sometime. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More??

I would love to see where you're going with this story...

mitchawamitchawaalmost 14 years ago
Chapter Two

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I like your writing style and while the plot seems to be predictable, the characters are well developed, and since I live in SC I'm interested in what comes next. I also noticed you didn't mention the race of George. Maybe his ethnic group should be understood, but I believe that piece of information is important.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Oh!

How I regret reading this, didn't know that this is the only chapter I'll ever get :'-(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
MORE MORE MORE

I love it! I cannot wait for the next chapters. If there would a book out there, I will get it this moment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Awsome

I loved it I want to read more. When is the next chapter coming out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Brilliant!

Brilliant first time!!! Thanks for the great read, I would love to read more installments

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Bring it on!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter,so many possibilities.

Thanks for the great read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Mesmerizing...

I can't waity for more! Keep posting new installments!

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayabout 18 years ago
Excellent....

and enjoyable...hope you continue this series it is very good so far. thank you for sharing. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
master

The writing is wonderful. I really get pulled into the story -sensuality is the key- and in my mind can picture the characters and setting.I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter, I will be patiently waiting

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